Six Sentence Sunday

It’s time for my first six sentence Sunday.  From my debut release, After Ten:

“Steve, please pick up.” As the phone rang on the other end with no answer, Tracey stared at the object she held in her hand. No, this couldn’t be happening. It really couldn’t be happening. Except it was. She looked at the plastic stick again.


7 comments on “Six Sentence Sunday

  1. Oooh, love those frantic phone calls. Nice, tight writing.

  2. A great piece! Thank you for sharing it with us. 🙂

  3. Wonderful six! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!

    Stephanie Adkins

  4. Fingers crossed Steve is the one responsible for the news on the stick… 😉

  5. Great first post. Welcome to SSS!

  6. What’s in her hand? OH! She’s pregnant! That’s the plastic stick? I’d be calling someone frantically, too….

  7. Very interesting start. And Welcome!

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